Jeremy is waiting in the doctors office when his name is called next.
Secretary: Jeremy Smithers
(Jeremy walks to the front desk & the Secretary
takes him to room 908)
A few minutes later:
(Door opens & in walks the doctor)
Doctor: Jeremy!!! Um.. long time no see!
Jeremy: Doctor, I have a problem. I can't remember anything.
Doctor: How long have you had this problem?
Jeremy: What problem?
The Doctors Office
ReplyDeleteAction: Jeremy wants to talk to his doctor & figure out why he can't remember anything.
Conflict: Jeremy can't remember anything.
Event: When Jeremy responds to the doctors question with..what problem?
I could probably change my dialogue by making my script longer. & continue with my story.